请给多大CS招生办公室写一封英文的信,要求他们将学生的EC纳入招生因素之一。原因如下:1. 同样高分的情况下,在EC上花很多时间的孩子显然学习能力更强,只有学校分数和essay不能甄选出真正学习能力强的学生。2. 多大CS的课程以难和要求严格淘汰率高而著称,挑选具有很强学习能力的学生符合学生的最大利益。这样可以避免录取后学生fail。3。多大的ES录取环节都将EC考虑进去,近年来CS的报考的热度已经接近或超过ES,为了更好的选出优质生源,没有理由不向ES学习,改进现有的招生方式。4. 学校保证教育质量不应该仅仅依赖淘汰制,CS专业加大招生挑选优质生源的力度,应该是保证教育质量的更有效更合理的方法。
Dear Admissions Office,
I am writing to express my concern about the current admissions process for Computer Science (CS) at your university. I strongly believe that the evaluation of a student's extracurricular activities (EC) should be considered as one of the admission factors.
There are several reasons for this. Firstly, when evaluating students based solely on their academic achievements such as grades and essays, it is difficult to determine their actual learning abilities. Students who spend more time on their ECs are likely to have better time management skills, be more organized, and have a greater level of commitment, all of which are essential skills for success in higher education and in the workforce.
Secondly, the CS program at your university is known for its high level of difficulty and rigorous demands, resulting in a high drop-out rate. Therefore, selecting students with strong learning abilities will not only benefit the students themselves but also ensure the quality of education at the university by minimizing the number of students who fail to complete their studies.
Thirdly, the university's admissions process for the Faculty of Engineering and Applied Science already takes ECs into consideration, and the CS program has become increasingly popular in recent years. Therefore, it would be reasonable to include ECs in the admissions process for CS in order to attract the best candidates and maintain the high standards of the program.
Finally, focusing solely on the elimination of students who do not meet academic standards is not an effective way to ensure the quality of education. By placing a greater emphasis on selecting students with strong learning abilities, the university can ensure that it attracts students who have the potential to excel in the program and beyond.
I hope that my proposal to consider ECs in the admissions process for CS at your university will be taken into consideration. Thank you for your time and attention to this matter.
Sincerely,
[Your Name]