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儿子诗集 ----请大家鉴赏我儿子近期学诗的成果

rogerz(piggy)

(1)雨的回忆

安静的夜晚即将来临
一个人躺在草地上
望着天空
要落的太阳点燃的雨滴
轻轻的打在脸上
心里感觉到了真正的孤独
眼泪和雨水结合了一起
家乡在彩虹的那一边
我在雨里面孤独着

(2)梦

黑黑的夜晚让我沉睡了
灵魂让闪烁的星星代进梦幻世界
太阳是一个美丽黄色照亮了天空
云彩是棉花糖一般软
用手一碰
一无所有
坐在床上望着太阳慢慢生起

(3)历史

古老,遥远,神秘
无数个战场上
厮杀的战士们失去性命
红色的血
淹没了成功与失败
帝国们生起,衰败
为了权利,为了钱而战斗
现在,都没了踪迹

(4)滑雪

白白一层
雪

爬上山坡
三十分钟

滑雪下山
五秒钟

从头再来
累

(注:个别错字未加修改)

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Last Updated: 2006-7-26

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枫下拾英 / 心情随笔 / 儿子诗集 ----请大家鉴赏我儿子近期学诗的成果 -rogerz(piggy); 2006-7-26 {602} (#3104675@0)

不错嘛,几岁了? -calumet(寸草春晖); 2006-7-26 (#3104724@0)

13 -rogerz(piggy); 2006-7-26 (#3104911@0)

感觉有你的影子,几岁的孩子也说孤独 -setmyheartfree2006(白色恋人); 2006-7-26 (#3104790@0)

看我的诗看的,自己在家没事,我又不让他玩游戏,能不孤独吗 -rogerz(piggy); 2006-7-26 (#3104920@0)

不愧是你儿子. 象! 个个都写得好. 个人更偏爱梦和滑雪. 想想我那时候连篇日记都困难, 更别说诗了, 惭愧, 惭愧. -paopao631(泡泡); 2006-7-27 (#3105124@0)

可能是他有天赋吧,我只是拿给他几本诗集叫他读,因为他说写作文太累,所以改写诗了."梦"是他做的一个梦,"滑雪"则是他床头一张去年滑雪的照片引发的 -rogerz(piggy); 2006-7-27 (#3105165@0)

My favor one is "滑雪", your son describe my skiing feeling precisely. next time, any beginner asks me about skiing, I can use this one. 100%, I do believe that " 他有天赋",不愧是你儿子. -cristina(cristina); 2006-7-27 (#3105495@0)

Thx Chris! I believe he will be much better than me. -rogerz(piggy); 2006-7-27 (#3105552@0)

U called me Chris again. eh? where is "凌儿", remember our bet for the good/bad ending of "南山书生", since both Chris & piggy all sounds bad, how about both us give 凌儿MM a big hug. -cristina(cristina); 2006-7-27 (#3105575@0)

That's a holly name I wish to call U, just take it. Linger is not a judge anymore, I'll keep my promise to give you a big hug for the bet I lost. -rogerz(piggy); 2006-7-27 (#3105589@0)

Oh, that's warm. at least U admit that you lost. Warm + haha -cristina(cristina); 2006-7-27 (#3105610@0)

Linger is laughing,2. -rogerz(piggy); 2006-7-27 (#3105620@0)

太好了,警报解除,我可以乐了......^_^ -o2o2o2(凌儿); 2006-7-27 (#3105948@0)

哦~~~,你们两个打赌,哪里有不论输赢hug裁判的道理? -o2o2o2(凌儿); 2006-7-27 (#3105944@0)

I don't think justice important, the important is 凌儿MM will smile. this morning didn't see you, went to study? -cristina(cristina); 2006-7-27 (#3106018@0)

I am quite busy this morning to preare for the work on Sat. But all are fine now. Thanks, sister. You are quite sweet. -o2o2o2(凌儿); 2006-7-27 (#3106120@0)

虎父无犬子:)) -flutterofbutterfly( 眉间心情); 2006-7-27 (#3105902@0)

猪父无耗子 -rogerz(piggy); 2006-7-27 (#3106032@0)

鉴于你儿子这么聪明,觉得你有必要再添丁...... 嘻嘻 -o2o2o2(凌儿); 2006-7-27 (#3105956@0)

LP说不行，没办法，看来只好找别人了：) -rogerz(piggy); 2006-7-27 (#3106013@0)

"你,你敢?借你个胆儿," 猪嫂曰 -flutterofbutterfly( 眉间心情); 2006-7-27 (#3106061@0)

其实国内有几个猪崽儿，这不，上个月还偷摸寄了好几笔抚养费呢 -rogerz(piggy); 2006-7-27 (#3106091@0)

呵呵, 小piggy 的cousins? What a man you are! -flutterofbutterfly( 眉间心情); 2006-7-27 (#3106105@0)

估计是有贼心没贼胆,呵呵 -o2o2o2(凌儿); 2006-7-27 (#3106124@0)

还是02明白 -rogerz(piggy); 2006-7-27 (#3106133@0)

改天要改名字了........:( -o2o2o2(凌儿); 2006-7-27 (#3106138@0)

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